Webpage+3

1. Headlines: Is the wording interesting, provocative, exciting and successful? why / why not? 2. Backgrounds: Are they energetic? Do they convey a Youth Innovation Award? 3. Statistics in each would change as you view the page. Would that be successful? What would you like to see? 4. Does the webpage show diversity, how could it be changed to do so?

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//Headline-//
 * Catch phrase is laid out in large font and in the center of the page, but it does not draw attention nor is it eye-catching
 * Tagline is not interesting

//Backgrounds-//
 * The background colours are too dark/ bland
 * No creativity
 * Too simple and unattractive
 * Overall design is not very successful
 * Nothing is catching
 * Background is not appealing
 * Nice, but not enough to pop!!
 * Dull colours, more bright colous would improve the webpage
 * It is neat and organized, but not eye-catching enough
 * Needs more pictures
 * Font is very plain
 * The picture of the girl blowing the flower is seen as somewhat irrelevant and random
 * Like the "green" feel to it
 * Bad design interface
 * Like the shading design

//Statistics-//
 * Statistic is nice, but irrelevant to the focus
 * The statistics box if my favourite part, but changing statistics would be easier when it's its own entity
 * Random statistics

//Diversity-//
 * Current state implies the only innovation is environmental
 * The focus seems to be on recycling

//Other comments-//
 * The Times New Roman font at the bottom of the page is unattractive and looks unprofessional
 * Bland font
 * Looks easy to navigate
 * User friendly
 * I appreciate the non-busyness because it's easier to intrepret
 * Don't like the picture of the girl at the bottom of the page
 * The "prizes" image is good and draws attention
 * Enough/clear designs to keep me interested, but not too much so as to be distracting
 * Bubbles around the font look messy/sloppy
 * I do not understandthe feeling o theis award. It doesn't capture the feeling of innovation/ the Weston Innovation Centre