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1. Headlines: Is the wording interesting, provocative, exciting and successful? why / why not? 2. Backgrounds: Are they energetic? Do they convey a Youth Innovation Award? 3. Statatistics in each would change as you view the page. Would that be successful? What would you like to see? 4. Does the webpage show diversity, how could it be changed to do so?

Comments:

1. Headlines:
 * Catch Phrase is not good
 * "stuff" is a bad word
 * award should stand out
 * don't like the slogan it sounds funny / not worded right but message is good
 * good slogan
 * interesting headlines
 * cliche statement
 * catch phrase is good
 * wording "stuff"?
 * "other people talk about doing stuff" what do you mean?
 * Should be more relevent into (ie - what is this and about?)
 * like the blurb in white

2. Background
 * I do not really like the stripes
 * attractive
 * bigger OSC logo-
 * Good setup
 * i think everything on angles amkes it more interesting
 * likes the shapes
 * don't like the background
 * Backround is distracting - desatirate/ fade out more to make other aspects more visable
 * Buttons oddly placed
 * like the backround but maybe keep all same colours
 * Don't like the background, pictures are not that good
 * hurts eyes/ neck, too geometric
 * good picture of the kids
 * great use of picture
 * "Perfect! his poster is really attractive; the picture with the teens and also the backround used is very attractive
 * like the angled lines and how menu is ilke that
 * good links to other pages (ie, how to enter, judging, etc)
 * looks good - i like the colours
 * stripes could change colours
 * vary colours/ add more colours
 * does not reflect the weston innovation centre/ no continuity
 * links are alright however the angle is too steep
 * adjust intensity of backround - too intense
 * backround is catchy

3. Statistics:
 * Statistics are interesting and catches your eye
 * good statistics box
 * why smoking?....
 * Statistics changing wuold be succesful, but i feel they should be more relevent to youths and to things that the award can be awarded for the youths doing.

4. Diversity:
 * The webpage does not clearly show diversity, include different clear diversity in pictures or in statistics.