Webpage+2

1. Headlines: Is the wording interesting, provocative, exciting and successful? why / why not? 2. Backgrounds: Are they energetic? Do they convey a Youth Innovation Award? 3. Statistics in each would change as you view the page. Would that be successful? What would you like to see? 4. Does the webpage show diversity, how could it be changed to do so?

1. Headlines:
 * definition good, bigger OSC logo
 * the use of definition is eyecatching
 * paragraph under definition is too big and not eye catching
 * to many words (or larger font)
 * logo off in corner
 * Definition is good catch point
 * main headline larger
 * Definition is a good idea
 * Get a better definition for innovation could be more inspiring
 * good idea with the dictionary definition, yet i dont like it much
 * larger font
 * OSC logo awkward
 * definition of innovation is alright
 * don't like the definitions boring and irrelevant

2. Backrounds
 * Stylin'
 * I like it
 * Ugly, waste of space
 * very futuristic
 * really like the pastel colours (arsty, watercolour like)
 * Colours are not blended well together. The hallway has a nice color (sfot colors) but the tree makes it look unrealistic. (there should be light at the end of the halllwas instead of a tree)
 * Everything is oddly places but layout is better than the other two, i think right side panel with links.
 * i like the backround of links on left
 * Future doesn't look to promising with only one tree
 * good colour palette
 * cliche picture
 * i like the colours
 * good mix of technology and art
 * Great Backround colors
 * no pictures of anything innovative
 * gentle colours good
 * design is nicely done
 * why is he walking towards a tree? i dont get it - simplify the design you don't need that much going on just beacuse it is a youth site
 * nice navigation bar, however the style does not fit. I would like it if it was all that style - less frills - not impressive anyways
 * to busy in the middle with nothign on the edges

3. Statistics
 * I find that the statistic used is not really helpful or attracting
 * like the fact
 * seem unimportant to the award, but it is interesting
 * like the idea of changing statistics
 * how does stat relate?
 * irrelevant facts

4. Diversity
 * Does not show diversity at all